Today was the absolute worst day ever.
And don’t try to convince me that
There’s something good in every day.
Because when you take a closer look
This world is a pretty evil place.
Even if
Some goodness shine through once in a while
Satisfaction and happiness don’t last.
And it’s true that
It’s all in the mind and heart.
Because,
True happiness can be attained
Only if one’s surroundings are good.
It’s not true that good exists.
I’m sure you can agree that
The reality
Creates
My attitude
It’s all beyond my control.
And you’ll never in a million years hear me say
Today was a very good day.
(NOW READ FROM BOTTOM TO TOP)
Furnell Brown
DOC #394357
Really clever.
good one!
As a world published classical poet, I want you to know I’ve said this to any living poet only a very shortlist of times in my nearly sixty years on this planet: That was absolutely brilliant.
I’m reblogging this to my sister site Success Inspirers World.
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That was amazing at first I thought dang what a downer you were until the end and then I read it like you said and laughed thank you for making me smile today!
Brilliant!! This is fascinating and ingenious!!
Furnell; Mr. Brown, this was one of the best ‘reverse poems’ I have ever seen…read. Amazing and wonderful.
You are truly blessed and gifted. I do not wish to be you, nor possess your skills, but I am glad you’ve shared this with us.
God Bless you and keep you. No reverse poetry included.
That is brilliantly clever!!
Am reblogging this to my blog Soul Gifts – telling tales
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A very clever poem!