If you have someone you love, someone you want to be with? Then don’t be afraid to fight for them. Don’t let you’re pride, you’re ego, OR YOU’RE FEAR!!! Keep you from not only fighting for it, and trying for it. If you love her, tell her often. If she makes you mad tell her, don’t run away. If she makes you jealous, fights with you and walks down the road. Chase her and tell her you love her. Show up at her work with flowers on her lunch break and embarrass her in front of everyone, just because you love her. To make the long story short, if you love her, or him? Then you fight for it, and don’t let go. At least then you will always know inside, that you gave it everything you had. You won’t have to spend the rest of your life second guessing yourself. -Amen
James Kelly
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Difference (aka James Kelly). You are absolutely correct. Those people which we love should be acknowledged daily for their contributions to our life. If it is a partner-spouse relationship, it should almost be every hour.
There have been many stories and poems written about those who feign criticism or disillusionment out of fear that that is what would happen if they disclosed their true feelings. Feelings are easily hurt.
As for your future blogs. Work on completing your thought within the sentences. When the sentence has an answer for itself, use semi colons. i.e. If she makes you jealous, fights with you and walks down the road. Chase her and tell her you love her.
It could read…If she makes you jealous, (and) fights with you and walks down the road; chase her and tell her you love her.
It is all one continuous thought. What you’ve written isn’t wrong; it’s just not romantic enough.
Rock on dude, and God Bless you.
I loved your post, it was really inspiring! Great job!